作者：秦顯貴

同學(xué)們，進(jìn)入初中學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)有一段時(shí)間了。對初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活你們有什么切身感受嗎？先讓我們來看看下面小作者的親身體會(huì)吧！

My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hui'an. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.

I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.

We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes, because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play basketball, soccer ball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.

I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life is more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?

簡評：本文寫出了該生的學(xué)校生活，寫出了其對校園生活的感受。文章語言平實(shí)，使讀者有身臨其境的感覺。但文章中段與段之間過渡得不夠自然。相信再多加練習(xí)，一定能寫出更好的文章。