高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文及名師評(píng)析

　　【試題回放】

　　一家賓館新開(kāi)業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其寫(xiě)一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價(jià)格：?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開(kāi)放; 5.歡迎預(yù)定。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開(kāi)頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確�？偟貋�(lái)說(shuō)，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿(mǎn)分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來(lái)便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來(lái)便利。