my classmate英語(yǔ)作文
A letter to my classmate
Dear Miss zhang,
Thank you so much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Wednesday. It was nice of you to come and see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present, which I enjoyed very much. I will probably hang it in my bedroom so that I can always see it!
It’s a weekend today, so I have some time to write some short letters enjoy my presents and start reading the book that my neighbor gave me.
How about you? Have you finished the book report for Mr. Gao? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
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要求：1、主題明確。語(yǔ)言流暢。思路清晰。 2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以?xún)?nèi)。
思路點(diǎn)撥
寫(xiě)記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述，所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。
這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以一、兩件事件為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個(gè)內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理，有真實(shí)感，敘述時(shí)可按事情發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行，同時(shí)加以點(diǎn)評(píng)。
參考范文一：我的同學(xué)(My Classmate)
Grace is one of my classmates. She is not good at study, though she usually works very hard. Maybe she just doesn’t find the learning method suitable for her. In my mind, she is clever. Thongh she is not good at study, she is popular in our class. In all people’s mind, she is kind and optimistic. Treating everyone as friend, she has no enemy. As she doesn’t study well, it is hard to avoid feeling sad. However, everytime she just feels sad for a while and then recovers for the first one. Sometimes it is her who comforts us for not for not doing well in the exam. Look, she is so cute!
格瑞斯是我的一個(gè)同學(xué)。她學(xué)習(xí)不好，雖然她平時(shí)非常努力學(xué)習(xí)。也許她只是沒(méi)有找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法而已。在我眼里，她是很聰明的。雖然她學(xué)習(xí)不好，但她在班里人緣很好。在所有人的眼里，她是友好，樂(lè)觀的。她對(duì)待每個(gè)人都像朋友一樣，所以她沒(méi)有敵人。因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)不好，難免會(huì)感到悲傷。但是，每次她都只是難過(guò)一會(huì)，就第一個(gè)恢復(fù)了。有時(shí)候還是她安慰我們這些因?yàn)榭荚嚥缓枚y過(guò)的人�？矗侨绱说目蓯�(ài)!
參考范文二：我的同學(xué)(My Classmate)
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others。
One day on his way to school， he saw a little girl crossing t he road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived， and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom， the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.