2015年中考英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)
閱讀電視廣告詞：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞的短文。
提示：
1.生活離不開(kāi)水。
2.可飲用水在減少。
3.水污染嚴(yán)重。
4.應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水。
思路點(diǎn)撥與參考答案
A. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
①文體：記敘文。
�、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫(xiě)作手法，增加感染力。
�、蹖�(xiě)作目的：告訴讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路點(diǎn)撥]：
①夾敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。
�、跁r(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
③廣告詞的含義——水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫(xiě)作意圖)。
Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
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